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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby Sky » Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:13 pm

Hi DotDan

Lovely leopard. Try cropping it on the front leg and shoulder
Make it a head and shoulder shot. This should also work

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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby NickyG » Thu Jun 10, 2010 9:53 pm

What I like about it is that its less obvious.
I mean, lions faces are a dime a dozen, yeah teh cropping could be better, but I feel your on a winner here because you have a different angle, which accentuates the size of teh forepaw.

maybe raise teh exposure by a 5th, and reduce the overall brighness. Would look good in a custom frame on a pillar. :thumbs_up:
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby NickyG » Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:03 pm

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Hope this helps a bit, noise removal, sepia conversion, and a crop. Also changed the overall brightness to try to fade out the lions behind in teh corner, and remove the road distraction. Dont worry - I would never use this myself. I have it saved as d van der bergh.
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby oddesy » Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:44 pm

I much prefer the original, never been a fan of sepia , the overexposd areas just catch my eye
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby Sky » Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:25 am

Sepia has never done it for me either. Original in my opinion much better

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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby moonflower » Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:06 am

Love the original one. :thumbs_up: There is so much expression in lions' faces.
Took a photo of one a year or so ago while he was lazing next to the road. But don't know how to upload it here? :huh: Pls help? About 1,28 Mb.
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby moonflower » Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:11 pm

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This was taken a while back close to Satara next to the tar road at 8 am on one of those veeerrrrryyyy hot days...comments?
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby DuQues » Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:24 pm

A while back.... November 2006! :lol:

But I have two little points.
You should have moved the car back a little, then you would have had a clear view of the lion. And that takes the grass out of his eye.

It's also cropped a little too close. A bit more room on top and bottom would mean that his head & hair is completely in view.

Okay, 3 little points. ;) Next time see if you can wait a bit till it's looking at you, and then make the photo. That gives far more eh.. feeling to it.
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby Switchback » Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:00 am

Spot on DuQues, when I saw the photo my first thoughts was: "Now where is that reverse gear lever again..."

Maybe also a tad over exposed :hmz:
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby moonflower » Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:33 am

Thanx for the comments guys! 8)
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby Fransmargate » Fri Oct 01, 2010 3:59 pm

Although I have never commented (still learning) I have always enjoyed the pics and comments.
Please help : Did I crop this pic too much - I also have the Goliath Heron where it actually caught the fish but thought it would have more impact if I cropped it and I maybe overdid it.

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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby RUMURUTI » Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:23 pm

Hi Fransmargate,
Yes, I think you cropped it a little too much especially on the top. Show us the original and lets see what's around it.

Very nice picture!!! :thumbs_up:
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby DuQues » Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:29 pm

Indeed posting the original photo would help us.

At the moment the heron looks to get a bump on the head if he lifts it a bit, but we don't know how much space there was...
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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby Fransmargate » Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:24 pm

Thank you for your replies. You have already opened my eyes to see what I was doing wrong. Here are two more pics


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Re: Photos for Criticism

Unread postby RUMURUTI » Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:35 pm

Fransmargate, thanks for posting the original shots.
Now, I'd leave the first shot as it is, cropping would just ruin it.
This is how I would crop the second one:
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Cropped in a proportional way and cut the dead branch on the right.
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